Nishant (latelyontime) wrote in orangesex,
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witnesses

OK after that huge conversation and debate about that one experiment that I posted, here is something more my style, something that will be easier perhaps to identify as poetry. I hold it close to me becuase it has so many memories associated with it. It is very recent and so am finding it very difficult to distance myself from it or critique it. As usual, comments, criticism (even very harsh criticism), responses, flattery and rebuke, are all welcome. Hope you enjoy reading this one.
Thanks all!

Witnesses


Seven stars stared
Down at

Us;

Through words that tri
ckled from between
the spa ces that
marked our hands.

Thoughts left
Conspicuous trails
That glistened in wing stirred starlight.

We
S n a i l e d
our way
Towards meanings disavowed
By silences
That rustle in smiles
Crinkling around the eyes.

And though you think no one saw
You whisper a kiss
Under the lavender caressed
Darkness,
You were wrong.

Seven stars stared down at us…
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